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Six Principles for Writing Effective Subject Lines
 
Subject lines are one of the most important components of a successful promotional or newsletter eMail.
 
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Working in tandem with the from line the content of a subject line is the main way in which the recipient decides whether to open an eMail; delete it immediately; ignore it; file it for future access; report it and/or filter it as spam.

The subject line content is also a major component in the algorithm of many ISP and recipient-level spam filters. In other words, a poorly-written subject lead may not only go unopened, it may not even reach the recipient’s inbox in the first place.

Keep these six principles in mind as you approach writing subject lines for your messages:
Principle 1: Inform 
Subject lines should convey something important, timely or valuable, and should say to the recipient: "If you don’t open and read this eMail, you'll miss out on something of real value."
Principle 2: Intrigue 
Your eMail is competing with 50 to 100 or more other eMails for the recipients' attention.

To increase the chance of having your eMail opened it must intrigue the recipient, the same way a well-written headline does.

It must stimulate the recipient prompting them to open the email immediately.
Principle 3: Entrust 
Your subject line can support or hurt your brand image.

Subject lines that over promise or mislead will ultimately destroy trust with recipients, damaging your brand and driving customers away.
Principle 4: Action 
Subject lines are a major driver of click-through rates, as they “direct” recipients to pay attention to specific articles, products and information.

Every eMail you send should have an overt or implied strategy behind it.

You hope that specific products are purchased over others or that recipients read a specific article and then visit your website seeking additional information.

Subject lines should reflect your goals and help direct recipients to take the desired action.
Principle 5: Empathy 
While your eMails may be distributed to thousands or millions of recipients, they are being received by individuals.

Subject lines must recognise this and “speak” to the needs and interests of your recipients as individual customers, readers or prospects.
Principle 6: Togetherness 
Subject Lines and From Lines Must Work Together)
Because of the dramatic increase in spam eMail in the last year or two, recipients increasingly look at a combination of the from and subject lines to determine whether it is from a trusted source.

As a result, the job of a subject line now must not only entice someone to open an eMail, it must discourage the recipient from deleting it as an unwanted eMail.
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Put More Value in Your Top Line
Are you wasting the most valuable real estate in your eMail message? You are if the first line readers see is a negative statement like this: "Having trouble viewing this message? Click here to view it on our Web site."

Thanks to preview panes, image-blocking and Outlook's Autopreview, this might be the only line readers see in your eMail. So, you need to give them a better incentive to scroll into the eMail or click to the web version.

Rewrite your top line each time so that it reiterates your value proposition or specifies the benefit in the message:
Tip 1 for offer-oriented messages 
"(Customer name), if you are unable to properly view your eMail to receive free shipping on your order, view the online version (URL) or enter promotional code ABCD1234 through August 27th to receive your special savings."
Tip 2 for eNewsletters 
"Scroll down to read why open rates don't really matter or click to see it on our Web site (URL)."

Yes, it adds maybe a minute of work each time you create a message but it could be your most valuable minute.
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